Feedback on a story?

Hi!
I wrote a story about a year ago and didn’t really promote it because I wrote it for fun but then someone in the new book club feature gave me cool feedback on it.
The story is called The influencer and is gem free. It is only 3 episodes for the moment so you can read it quickly. I would love to have other feedback!
Thank you!
Ellie <3

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I’ll help

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I read your story. It was pretty good. I like how the choices actually matter for once. You directing is pretty good. I like how the MC isn’t super-confident for once. It’s a good-natured inoffensive story

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Thank you so much for your feedback!! It means a lot to me ^^

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