Well, I have been messing about with limelight a bit as I never have really used it for directing so would love to see what y’all think.
I made this snippet for fun but would you be into reading this sort of story…?
Well, I have been messing about with limelight a bit as I never have really used it for directing so would love to see what y’all think.
I made this snippet for fun but would you be into reading this sort of story…?
The MC is a POC male whose run away from the most important day of his life and his life changes from that day onwards.
Omg I really don’t like Limelight, but your idea is great! I’d probably keep reading of you published it. Lalit is the rebellious character I’m searching for in our society
Haha thank you, Lalit is petty af as well I already have a bunch of favourite insults for Lalit to use if I ever publish this:
fuck nugget
bitch breath
hoe factory
Any other victims? I mean readers…
coughs then burps because Lalit got that kinda attitude
Also, if I ever do publish this story I am calling my readers f*ck nuggets
Please publish it, I want to see people’s reactions to being called that
Loool first chapter
"“Wassup f*ck nuggets?”
If it isn’t obvious this story has some crude humour, a lot of cussing and pettiness too so you have been warned
Here is some dialogue I planned out.
KALLUM: Whaddup, ass cake?
LALIT: For once in your sad life, can you not be such a f*ck nugget?
KALLUM: Only if you stop being a little b*tch wipe.
LALIT: Damn it, Kallum. This is serious!
KALLUM: Spit it out then, buddy.
LALIT: I am in deep sh*t so um help me.
other random dialog
SUSAN: Oh gosh, sir are you okay?
LALIT: …
SUSAN: DO YOU SPEAK ENGLISH?
LALIT: Thirsty.
SUSAN: Do you want some water?
SUSAN: But to be safe is it against your culture for me to give you this type of water?
Y’all I made a monster and to make things worse I break the fourth wall. A lot.