Feedback on art please! part 1/4


#1


#2

The white lines need to get off


#3

It looks great, but yeah, get rid of the white lines. I have an app I use- if you give me them I can clean them up for you! (obviously no credit towards me)


#4

I agree with the white lines, when clotting Out my characters I use PicsArt. Otherwise that’s Purtiful!


#5

thx madi


#6

Are your Clyde and Bonnie be like real Clyde and Bonnie as bank robbers?


#7

huh? Yh kinda


#8

Oh good!! Can’t wait to read your story!!


#9

Shoot that’s a real story! You can count on a read from me!


#10

i like it, but as they said, the white lines need to get off. maybe shade it a little so it matches its background?


#11