Feedback on Characters

Hey guys so I’m trying to increase diversity in my story and just want to know if the features are correct. If you have any suggestions on how to improve my character please let me know!

Characters + Descriptions

indian, i think she looks good but i want to improve her outfit

Okay she was in the middle of blinking ignore that but kinda punk if that makes sense

rich backstabbing girl

also rich white girl

Japanese, think i can improve the lips but not sure how

She’s supposed to be like African American but mostly African if that makes sense


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love it!

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