Heyy, I need feedback on my description or a possible change
My story is a mystery/LGBTQ/thriller story. The name of the story is Stained blood.
The plot is
The dead happens in a small town called Northville. When Finlay decides to hold an investigation, the family members ban every detective and policemen to research the scene. They told the press that the chief council died of natural causes letting The town believe that the chief council died by natural cause. When the funeral is held, Finlay starts a secret investigation with his partner in crime finding more sinister things happening in the scene.
The current description now is
Claiming that the chief council died by natural causes, Finaly investigates the scene to find out something more sinister is going on in the small town of Northville.
