I’ve just finished the first episode on another one of my stories. I really want to finish this story but I don’t want to move on before getting someone elses feedback, so yeah I would love if someone just read this first episode and told me if it’s a good plot idea, if you like the charcaters, if you like the directing etc.
Additional info, the first episode still has some things in can work on, and it would also be great if you would want to help me come up with ideas for this:
I want to create an animated intro in the beginning, the reason I haven’t done that yet is because I don’t have a title for the story (it’s quite hard creating covers etc. without having the title). If you decide that you would want to read my first episode, feel free to also tell me if you have any ideas on a title!
I think that my first episode also might be too short, but I have no idea on what scenes to include in order to make it longer. I maybe need a good cliffhanger too, so if you are creative and get what I’m trying to achieve with the story when reading it it would be great if you would help me with some ideas!
Thanks in advance, if I happen to publish this story in the future I’ll of course give you credit for helping me.