Feedback on my 1st story?

Hello everyone! I’m a new writer on Episode and I just created an Episode Forum account. I uploaded the 3 first chapters fo my first story, about half an hour ago.
If any of you want to help me with all this, which is new to me, all you have to do is to just click this link ( http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5683419742273536 ), play my story, and give me some advice on what I could improve!
P.S. This is my first story ever so I know it probably needs a lot of work! But I will ask you to be as polite and understanding as you can, while playing it and while you are giving me your precious feedback.
Thanks to everyone who helps♥

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congrats on releasing your first story! :two_hearts::star_struck: I can give you feedback if you would like, but i’m going to be very honest. would you like that?

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Of course! I need all the feedback I can get!:heart:

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great i’ll get started right away! expect your review in about an hour! :grin:

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Alright! Thank you very much! :heart:

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