Feedback on my art


#1

Hey guys, so this is my first time doing art like this. I’d really like some feedback on it.


#2


The only thing I suggest you to do is make the neck shape more… Neck.
I tried making what I mean with that red line.


#3

It is really nice it shows an emotion of fear or emptiness maybe… I don’t know if that is what you were intending to do but it is very nice. My only suggestion is that you fix the line of the neck @Lelsaac mention and you add some hairs and contrast on the strands of hair, so it doesn’t look so flat.


#4

The skin tone is really dark, if that’s what you were going for then it’s okay. But I think you shaded in some areas but it looks really dull, try making it not as dark.


#5

Thank you guys for your feedback :slightly_smiling_face:


#6

If you ever need honest feedback we will be more then happy to help :wink:


#7

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#8