Feedback on my art


Hey guys, so this is my first time doing art like this. I’d really like some feedback on it.


The only thing I suggest you to do is make the neck shape more… Neck.
I tried making what I mean with that red line.


It is really nice it shows an emotion of fear or emptiness maybe… I don’t know if that is what you were intending to do but it is very nice. My only suggestion is that you fix the line of the neck @Lelsaac mention and you add some hairs and contrast on the strands of hair, so it doesn’t look so flat.


The skin tone is really dark, if that’s what you were going for then it’s okay. But I think you shaded in some areas but it looks really dull, try making it not as dark.


Thank you guys for your feedback :slightly_smiling_face:


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