Feedback on my contest story MC: THE RIGHT TIME

Hi!

I have published my first contest story ever and I would love to get some feedback on it :blush:

I put so much effort in this story, creating many different storylines based on the choices readers make. I hope you’ll enjoy it :gem:

Title: MC: The Right Time
Author: Mystique
Style: Limelight
Chapters: 3 -> I plan to publish chapter 4 (the big finale) as soon as possible
Description: Scarlett enjoys her single life. Then she meets an alluring stranger and is determined to find them. What’s the catch? Well, they aren’t from this time. And what about Scarlett?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6041338662420480

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