Feedback on my first episode?

I’m starting my second story and would love feedback on the first episode that I just finished and I’m totally down to read an episode of your story!!!

Here is the cover!!


love the cover, I be happy to do a review, though I can be a bit harsh. I try to be helpfull, but bad is bad and I am gonna say that.

I would love to review your first episode!

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