Feedback on my First Story before I am to publish it!

Hi everyone,

I am writing my first ever story and I need feedback, I am currently working on Episode 3 so would love if someone could look at what I have done so far including episode 3 please.

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You totally revamped the story, since I first read it! Wow, some french in there too!

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Wow, that was a abrupt ending. I love it!

Well it’s still in the works!

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its good wither way!

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