Feedback on my First Story?

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#1

HI! I just released the seventh episode to my story Beautiful Boy and I would love some feedback
I’m posting new episodes weekly now!

It is about a girl who is forced to switch places with her brother at a summer camp after an accident. She faces falling in love, being blackmailed, under attack, and hiding her secret identity.


#6

Would also like to know if you want two episodes a week or one extra long one a week?


#7

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#8