I am working very hard on my first story, “The Black Order”.
I have recently finished my first chapter, but I’m terrified that when I continue to write on my next chapters, I will repeat the same mistakes I did in my first. I’m also curious about what you might like about it.
I would truly appricate any feedback so much! I’m in no way easily hurt, so please be honest.
This is what I thought the covers could look like:
This is what I thought the description could be:
The story takes place in London, year 1839. As mysterious disappearances rages The Empire, you and your twin sister are recruited into the Black Order. A secret organisation for people with magical abilities, that seek to solve this mystery. This leads you into a chaos of love, life threatening missions, a king that grows more insane by each day and a war far greater then you could ever imagine.
NB! I’m a Norwegian girl, so I suspect some grammar mistakes.
Thank you! - Luna