Feedback on my new story coming out

INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@WHITNEY enters from left to screen center AND WHITNEY is walk_sing_energetic_loop
WHITNEY (talk_excited_happy)
Welcome to Risk in Love! I hope you enjoy
WHITNEY (talk_neutral)
Now it’s time to customize the Main Character!
@WHITNEY is kiss_blow_happy_atcamera
@pause for a beat
@WHITNEY exits left AND WHITNEY is walk_neutral_loop
@OLIVIA enters from left to screen center AND OLIVIA is walk_sing_energetic_loop
NARRATOR
Olivia is the main character of the story. Would you like to customized her?
choice
"Yes. I need to change her look " {

Avatar - Limelight Female1 {

Limelight Female Character Template

This template was created in collaboration with Dara Amarie

Check out more of her work on instagram @dara.amarie.ep

To give her a shoutout in your story,

remove the hash from the reader message at the bottom of this template.

Be sure to replace OLIVIA with your characters name

To do this:

Highlight OLIVIA

Press Ctrl + F on your keyboard (Cmd + F for Macs)

Click on “All” on the bar in the pop up

Type in your character’s name in all caps

@OLIVIA enters from left to screen center

label female_custom_1

@zoom reset
@OLIVIA starts think_rubchin
@speechbubble reset

    NARRATOR
So, what would you like to change?

choice
“Skin Tone” {
@OLIVIA starts idle_happy_loop
goto fem_skin_1
}
“Hair” {

@zoom reset
@zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
@OLIVIA starts idle_happy_loop

goto fem_hair_1
}
“Eyes” {

@OLIVIA starts idle
@zoom reset
@zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0

goto fem_eyes_1
}
“Eyebrows” {

@zoom reset
@zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
@OLIVIA starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

goto fem_brows_1
}
“Face Shape”{

@zoom reset
@zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
@OLIVIA starts idle_happy_loop

goto fem_face_1
}
“Nose” {
@zoom reset
@zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
@OLIVIA starts idle

goto fem_nose_1
}
“Mouth” {

@zoom reset
@zoom on 150 350 to 165% in 0
@OLIVIA starts idle

goto fem_mouth_1
}
“This is perfect!” {
goto female_1_end
}

####################### SKIN COLOR #######################

label fem_skin_1

    NARRATOR
All skin tones.

choice
“Lighter Shades” {
goto fem_lightskin_1
} “Medium Shades” {
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Darker Shades” {
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Ash Shades” {
goto fem_ashskin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}

label fem_lightskin_1

    NARRATOR
Light skin tones.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Light 1” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Neutral 00
goto fem_lightskin_1
} “Light 2” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Rose 00
goto fem_lightskin_1
} “Light 3” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Gold 00
goto fem_lightskin_1
} “Light 4” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Copper 00
goto fem_lightskin_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Light 5” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Neutral 01
goto fem_lightskin_1
} “Light 6” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Rose 01
goto fem_lightskin_1
} “Light 7” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Gold 01
goto fem_lightskin_1
} “Light 8” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Copper 01
goto fem_lightskin_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Light 9” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Neutral 02
goto fem_lightskin_1
} “Light 10” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Rose 02
goto fem_lightskin_1
} “Light 11” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Gold 02
goto fem_lightskin_1
} “Light 12” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Copper 02
goto fem_lightskin_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}

label fem_medskin_1

    NARRATOR
Medium skin tones.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Medium 1” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Neutral 03
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Medium 2” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Rose 03
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Medium 3” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Gold 03
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Medium 4” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Copper 03
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Medium 5” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Neutral 04
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Medium 6” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Rose 04
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Medium 7” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Gold 04
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Medium 8” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Copper 04
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Medium 9” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Neutral 05
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Medium 10” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Rose 05
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Medium 11” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Gold 05
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Medium 12” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Copper 05
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Medium 13” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Neutral 06
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Medium 14” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Rose 06
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Medium 15” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Gold 06
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Medium 16” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Copper 06
goto fem_medskin_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}

label fem_darkskin_1

    NARRATOR
Dark skin tones.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Dark 1” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Neutral 07
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Dark 2” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Rose 07
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Dark 3” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Gold 07
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Dark 4” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Copper 07
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Dark 5” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Neutral 08
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Dark 6” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Rose 08
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Dark 7” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Gold 08
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Dark 8” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Copper 08
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Dark 9” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Neutral 09
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Dark 10” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Rose 09
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Dark 11” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Gold 09
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Dark 12” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Copper 09
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Dark 13” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Neutral 10
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Dark 14” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Rose 10
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Dark 15” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Gold 10
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Dark 16” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Copper 10
goto fem_darkskin_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}

label fem_ashskin_1

    NARRATOR
Ash skin tones.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Ash 1” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Ash 00
goto fem_ashskin_1
} “Ash 2” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Ash 01
goto fem_ashskin_1
} “Ash 3” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Ash 02
goto fem_ashskin_1
} “Ash 4” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Ash 03
goto fem_ashskin_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Ash 5” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Ash 04
goto fem_ashskin_1
} “Ash 6” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Ash 05
goto fem_ashskin_1
} “Ash 7” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Ash 06
goto fem_ashskin_1
} “Ash 8” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Ash 07
goto fem_ashskin_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Ash 9” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Ash 08
goto fem_ashskin_1
} “Ash 10” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Ash 09
goto fem_ashskin_1
} “Ash 11” {
@OLIVIA changes bodyColor into Ash 10
goto fem_ashskin_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
} “Different Shades” {
goto fem_skin_1
}

####################### EYEBROWS #######################

label fem_brows_1

    NARRATOR
Eyebrow shapes.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Arched Natural”{
@OLIVIA changes eyebrows into Arched Natural
goto fem_brows_1
}“Arched Thick”{
@OLIVIA changes eyebrows into Arched Thick Styled
goto fem_brows_1
}“Arched Thin”{
@OLIVIA changes eyebrows into Arched Thin
goto fem_brows_1
}“Arched Thin High”{
@OLIVIA changes eyebrows into Arched Thin High
goto fem_brows_1
} “Select Color” {
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}
“Round Medium”{
@OLIVIA changes eyebrows into Round Medium
goto fem_brows_1
}“Round Thick”{
@OLIVIA changes eyebrows into Round Thick
goto fem_brows_1
}“Round Thin”{
@OLIVIA changes eyebrows into Round Thin High
goto fem_brows_1
}“Straight Medium”{
@OLIVIA changes eyebrows into Straight Medium
goto fem_brows_1
} “Select Color” {
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}
“High Arch Angled”{
@OLIVIA changes eyebrows into High Arch Angled
goto fem_brows_1
}“Bushy Thick”{
@OLIVIA changes eyebrows into Bushy Thick
goto fem_brows_1
}“Arched Short”{
@OLIVIA changes eyebrows into Arched Short
goto fem_brows_1
}“Arched Natural Scar”{
@OLIVIA changes eyebrows into Arched Natural Scar
goto fem_brows_1
} “Select Color” {
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}

####################### EYEBROW COLOR #######################

label fem_browscolor_1

    NARRATOR
Eyebrow colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Dirty Blonde” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Dirty Blonde
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Honey Blonde” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Honey Blonde
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Platinum Blonde” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Platinum Blonde
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Strawberry Blonde” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Strawberry Blonde
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Change Brow Shape” {
goto fem_brows_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Blonde Medium” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Blonde Medium
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Chestnut Brown” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Chestnut Brown
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Dark Brown” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Dark Brown
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Deep Brown” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Deep Brown
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Change Brow Shape” {
goto fem_brows_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Light Brown” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Light Brown
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Dark Black” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Black Dark
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Jet Black” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into blackJet
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Light Pink” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Pink Lt
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Change Brow Shape” {
goto fem_brows_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Lavender” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Purple Lilac
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Mint” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Green Mint
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Ginger Red” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Ginger Red
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Copper Red” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Copper Red
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Change Brow Shape” {
goto fem_brows_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Gray” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into Gray
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “White” {
@OLIVIA changes eyebrowsColor into White
goto fem_browscolor_1
} “Change Brow Shape” {
goto fem_brows_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}

####################### FACE SHAPE #######################

label fem_face_1

    NARRATOR
Face shapes.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Diamond” {
@OLIVIA changes face into Diamond
goto fem_face_1
} “Long Diamond” {
@OLIVIA changes face into Diamond Long
goto fem_face_1
} “Defined Heart” {
@OLIVIA changes face into Heart Defined
goto fem_face_1
} “Soft Heart” {
@OLIVIA changes face into Heart Soft
goto fem_face_1
} “Defined Triangle” {
@OLIVIA changes face into Triangle Defined
goto fem_face_1
} “Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}
“Mature Square” {
@OLIVIA changes face into Square Mature
goto fem_face_1
} “Mature Heart” {
@OLIVIA changes face into Heart Mature
goto fem_face_1
} “Soft Round” {
@OLIVIA changes face into Round Soft
goto fem_face_1
} “Heart Mature Double Chin” {
@OLIVIA changes face into Heart Mature Double Chin
goto fem_face_1
}“Diamond Defined Contour” {
@OLIVIA changes face into Diamond Defined Contour
goto fem_face_1
}
“Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}
“Round Puffy Cheek” {
@OLIVIA changes face into Round Puffy Cheek
goto fem_face_1
}“Square Defined” {
@OLIVIA changes face into Square Defined
goto fem_face_1
}
“Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}

####################### EYE SHAPE #######################

label fem_eyes_1

    NARRATOR
Eye shapes.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Deepset Downturned” {
@OLIVIA changes eyes into Deepset Downturned
goto fem_eyes_1
} “Deepset Mature” {
@OLIVIA changes eyes into Deepset Mature
goto fem_eyes_1
} “Generic” {
@OLIVIA changes eyes into Female Generic
goto fem_eyes_1
} “Slender” {
@OLIVIA changes eyes into Monolid Slender
goto fem_eyes_1
} “Select Color”{
goto fem_eyecolor_1
} “Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}
“Round Wide” {
@OLIVIA changes eyes into Round Downturned Wide
goto fem_eyes_1
} “Round Medium” {
@OLIVIA changes eyes into Round Medium
goto fem_eyes_1
} “Sharp Almond” {
@OLIVIA changes eyes into Sharp Almond
goto fem_eyes_1
} “Deepset Almond” {
@OLIVIA changes eyes into Deepset Almond
goto fem_eyes_1
} “Select Color”{
goto fem_eyecolor_1
} “Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}

####################### EYE COLOR #######################

label fem_eyecolor_1

    NARRATOR
Eye colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Aqua Blue” {
@OLIVIA changes eyesColor into Blue Aqua
goto fem_eyecolor_1
} “Deep Blue” {
@OLIVIA changes eyesColor into Blue Deep
goto fem_eyecolor_1
} “Light Brown” {
@OLIVIA changes eyesColor into Brown Light
goto fem_eyecolor_1
} “Dark Brown” {
@OLIVIA changes eyesColor into Brown Dark
goto fem_eyecolor_1
} “Change Eye Shape” {
goto fem_eyes_1
} “Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}
“Black” {
@OLIVIA changes eyesColor into Brown Black
goto fem_eyecolor_1
} “Green” {
@OLIVIA changes eyesColor into Green Emerald
goto fem_eyecolor_1
} “Silver” {
@OLIVIA changes eyesColor into Grey Cool
goto fem_eyecolor_1
} “Hazel” {
@OLIVIA changes eyesColor into Hazel
goto fem_eyecolor_1
} “Change Eye Shape” {
goto fem_eyes_1
} “Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}
“Red” {
@OLIVIA changes eyesColor into Red
goto fem_eyecolor_1
} “Violet” {
@OLIVIA changes eyesColor into Violet
goto fem_eyecolor_1
} “Change Eye Shape” {
goto fem_eyes_1
} “Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}

####################### MOUTH SHAPE #######################

label fem_mouth_1

    NARRATOR
Mouth shapes.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Full Heart” {
@OLIVIA changes mouth into Full Heart Pouty
goto fem_mouth_1
}“Full Round” {
@OLIVIA changes mouth into Full Round Pouty
goto fem_mouth_1
}“Medium Natural” {
@OLIVIA changes mouth into Medium Heart Natural
goto fem_mouth_1
}“Medium Thin” {
@OLIVIA changes mouth into Medium Thin
goto fem_mouth_1
}“Select Color”{
goto fem_mouthcolor_1
} “Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}
“Thin Heart” {
@OLIVIA changes mouth into Thin Heart
goto fem_mouth_1
}“Small Heart” {
@OLIVIA changes mouth into Small Heart
goto fem_mouth_1
}“Flat Round” {
@OLIVIA changes mouth into Full Round Flat Top Skin
goto fem_mouth_1
} “Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}“Select Color”{
goto fem_mouthcolor_1
}

####################### MOUTH COLOR #######################

label fem_mouthcolor_1

    NARRATOR
All lip colors.

choice
“Natural” {
goto NaturalColors_1
} “Gloss” {
goto GlossColors_1
} “Matte” {
goto MatteColors_1
} “Change Lip Shape” {
goto fem_mouth_1
}

label NaturalColors_1

    NARRATOR
Natural lip colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Fair Rose” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Fair Rose Matte
goto NaturalColors_1
} “Fair Neutral” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Fair Neutral Matte
goto NaturalColors_1
} “Fair Gold” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Fair Gold Matte
goto NaturalColors_1
} “Beige Light Gold” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Beige Light Gold Matte
goto NaturalColors_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto fem_mouthcolor_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Beige Gold” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Beige Gold Matte
goto NaturalColors_1
} “Beige Rose” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Beige Rose
goto NaturalColors_1
} “Beige Deep Neutral” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Beige Deep Neutral
goto NaturalColors_1
} “Tan Deep Neutral” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Tan Deep Neutral
goto NaturalColors_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto fem_mouthcolor_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Brown Neutral” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Brown Neutral
goto NaturalColors_1
} “Brown Gold” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Brown Gold
goto NaturalColors_1
} “Brown Deep Gold” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Brown Deep Gold
goto NaturalColors_1
} “Brown Deep Rose” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Brown Deep Rose
goto NaturalColors_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto fem_mouthcolor_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}

label GlossColors_1

    NARRATOR
Gloss lipstick colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Peach” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Peach Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Light Peach” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Pink Peach Lt Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Beige Pink” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Pink Beige Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Medium Pink” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Pink Medium Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto fem_mouthcolor_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Warm Pink” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Pink Warm Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Hot Pink” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Pink Hot Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Deep Pink” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Pink Deep Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Rose” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Rose Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto fem_mouthcolor_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Mauve” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Mauve Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Pastel Purple” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Purple Pastel Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Plum” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Plum Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Red” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Red Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto fem_mouthcolor_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Deep Red” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Red Deep Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Violet” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Violet Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Black” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Black Gloss
goto GlossColors_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto fem_mouthcolor_1
}

label MatteColors_1

    NARRATOR
Matte lipstick colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Peach” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Peach Matte
goto MatteColors_1
} “Light Peach” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Pink Peach Light Matte
goto MatteColors_1
} “Beige Pink” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Pink Beige Matte
goto MatteColors_1
} “Medium Pink” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Pink Medium Matte
goto MatteColors_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto fem_mouthcolor_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Warm Pink” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Pink Warm Matte
goto MatteColors_1
} “Hot Pink” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Pink Hot Matte
goto MatteColors_1
} “Deep Pink” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Pink Deep Matte
goto MatteColors_1
} “Rose” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Rose Matte
goto MatteColors_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto fem_mouthcolor_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Mauve” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Mauve Matte
goto GlossColors_1
} “Pastel Purple” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Purple Pastel Matte
goto GlossColors_1
} “Plum” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Plum Matte
goto GlossColors_1
} “Red” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Red Matte
goto GlossColors_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto fem_mouthcolor_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Deep Red” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Red Deep Matte
goto GlossColors_1
} “Violet” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Violet Matte
goto GlossColors_1
} “Black” {
@OLIVIA changes mouthColor into Black Matte
goto GlossColors_1
} “Done” {
goto female_custom_1
} “Try Other Colors” {
goto fem_mouthcolor_1
}

####################### NOSE SHAPE #######################

label fem_nose_1

    NARRATOR
Nose shapes.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Defined” {
@OLIVIA changes nose into Defined Natural
goto fem_nose_1
} “Grecian” {
@OLIVIA changes nose into Grecian Soft
goto fem_nose_1
} “Broad” {
@OLIVIA changes nose into Round Broad
goto fem_nose_1
} “Button” {
@OLIVIA changes nose into Round Button
goto fem_nose_1
} “Upturned” {
@OLIVIA changes nose into Round Button Upturned
goto fem_nose_1
} “Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}
“Downturned” {
@OLIVIA changes nose into Round Downturned
goto fem_nose_1
} “Flared” {
@OLIVIA changes nose into Round Flared Upturned
goto fem_nose_1
} “Pointed Downturned” {
@OLIVIA changes nose into Pointed Downturned
goto fem_nose_1
} “Round Flared Downturned” {
@OLIVIA changes nose into Round Flared Downturned
goto fem_nose_1
} “Broad Wide” {
@OLIVIA changes nose into Broad Wide
goto fem_nose_1
} “Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}

####################### HAIR STYLE #######################

label fem_hair_1

    NARRATOR
All hair styles.

choice
“Short Hair”{
goto hairShort_1
}“Mid-length Hair”{
goto hairMedium_1
}“Long Hair”{
goto hairLong_1
}“Styled Hair”{
goto hairUp_1
}“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}

label hairShort_1

    NARRATOR
Short hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Afro” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Afro
goto hairShort_1
}“Blunt Bangs” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Blunt Bangs Short
goto hairShort_1
}“Classic Bob” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Classic Bob
goto hairShort_1
} “Curly Bob” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Curly Bob
goto hairShort_1
}“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto fem_hair_1
}
“Fade” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Short Curly Fade
goto hairShort_1
}“Pixie” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Short Pixie
goto hairShort_1
}“Short Wavy” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Short Wavy Hair Solid
goto hairShort_1
}“Short Curly Blow Out” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Short Curly Blow Out
goto hairShort_1
}“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto fem_hair_1
}
“Short Wavy Side Shave” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Short Wavy Side Shave
goto hairShort_1
}“Short Afro” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Short Afro
goto hairShort_1
}“Crew Cut” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Crew Cut
goto hairShort_1
}“Bantu Knots” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Bantu Knots
goto hairShort_1
}
“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto fem_hair_1
}
“Small Bun” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Small Bun
goto hairShort_1
}“Short Straight Tucked” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Short Straight Tucked
goto hairShort_1
}“Short Layered Fringe” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Short Layered Fringe
goto hairShort_1
}
“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto fem_hair_1
}

label hairMedium_1

    NARRATOR
Medium hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Braided” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Medium Braided
goto hairMedium_1
}“Medium Dreadlocks” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Medium Dreadlocks
goto hairMedium_1
}“Wavy Ombre” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Short Wavy Ombre
goto hairMedium_1
}“Straight” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Straight Medium
goto hairMedium_1
}“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto fem_hair_1
}
“Medium Curly” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Medium Curly Solid
goto hairMedium_1
}“Hair Flip” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Hair Flip
goto hairMedium_1
}“Voluminous Curls” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Voluminous Curls
goto hairMedium_1
} “Lob Bangs Blunt” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Lob Bangs Blunt
goto hairMedium_1
}“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto fem_hair_1
}
“Medium Straight Overgrown Bangs” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Medium Straight Overgrown Bangs
goto hairMedium_1
}“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto fem_hair_1
}

label hairLong_1

    NARRATOR
Long hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Beach Wave” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Beach Wave Hair
goto hairLong_1
}“Long Braided” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Long Braided
goto hairLong_1
}“Long Dreadlocks” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Long Dreadlocks
goto hairLong_1
}“Feathered” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Long Feathered
goto hairLong_1
}“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto fem_hair_1
}
“Long Blunt Bangs” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Long Straight Loose Bangs Blunt Solid
goto hairLong_1
}“Sideswept Bangs” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Long Straight Loose Bangs Sideswept Solid
goto hairLong_1
}“Straight” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Long Straight Loose Solid
goto hairLong_1
}“Wavy Long” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Wavy Long
goto hairLong_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto fem_hair_1
}“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}
“Dreads Braided” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Dreads Braided
goto hairLong_1
} “Long Voluminous Curls Loose” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Long Voluminous Curls Loose
goto hairLong_1
}“Long Wavy Parted Hair” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Long Wavy Parted Hair
goto hairLong_1
} “Sleek Ponytail” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Sleek Ponytail
goto hairLong_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto fem_hair_1
}“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}
“Long Feathered Bangs Blunt” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Long Feathered Bangs Blunt
goto hairLong_1
} “Pinup Victory Rolls” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Pinup Victory Rolls
goto hairLong_1
} “Over Shoulder Braid” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Over Shoulder Braid
goto hairLong_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto fem_hair_1
}“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}

label hairUp_1

    NARRATOR
Updo hair styles.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Braided Bun” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Braided Bun
goto hairUp_1
}“Faux Hawk” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Long Faux Hawk Solid
goto hairUp_1
}“Short Ponytail” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Short High Ponytail
goto hairUp_1
}“Long Ponytail” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Long High Ponytail
goto hairUp_1
}“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto fem_hair_1
}
“Morning Updo” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Morning Updo
goto hairUp_1
}“Punk Pixie” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Punk Pixie
goto hairUp_1
}“Long Double Dutch Braids” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Long Double Dutch Braids
goto hairUp_1
}“Braids Updo” {
@OLIVIA changes hair into Braids Updo
goto hairUp_1
}“Change Color”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Back to Styles”{
goto fem_hair_1
}

####################### HAIR COLOR #######################

label fem_haircolor_1

    NARRATOR
All hair colors.

choice
“Dark”{
goto hairDark_1
}“Light” {
goto hairLight_1
}“Dyed”{
goto hairDye_1
}“Done”{
goto female_custom_1
} “Back to Styles” {
goto fem_hair_1
}

label hairDark_1

    NARRATOR
Dark hair colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Light Brown” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Light Brown
goto hairDark_1
}“Warm Brown” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Medium Warm Brown
goto hairDark_1
}“Chestnut Brown”{
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Chestnut Brown
goto hairDark_1
}“Dark Brown”{
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Dark Brown
goto hairDark_1
}“Different Colors”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}
“Deep Brown” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Deep Brown
goto hairDark_1
}“Burgundy” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Burgundy Red
goto hairDark_1
}“Dark Black” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Black Dark
goto hairDark_1
}“Jet Black” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Black Jet
goto hairDark_1
}“Different Colors”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}

label hairLight_1

    NARRATOR
Light hair colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Platinum Blonde” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Platinum Blonde
goto hairLight_1
}“Dirty Blonde” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Dirty Blonde
goto hairLight_1
}“Honey Blonde” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Honey Blonde
goto hairLight_1
}“Strawberry Blonde” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Strawberry Blonde
goto hairLight_1
}“Different Colors”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}
“Medium Blonde” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Blonde Medium
goto hairLight_1
}“Ash Blonde” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Ash Blonde
goto hairLight_1
}“Different Colors”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}

label hairDye_1

    NARRATOR
Dyed hair colors.

choice
“Pink/Purple” {
goto hairDye_Pink_1
}“Blue/Green” {
goto hairDye_Blue_1
}“Red/Orange” {
goto hairDye_Red_1
}“White/Grey/Yellow” {
goto hairDye_Gray_1
}“Different Colors”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Done”{
goto female_custom_1
}

label hairDye_Pink_1

    NARRATOR
Pink and purple hair colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Hot Pink” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Hot Pink
goto hairDye_Pink_1
} “Light Pink” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Pink Lt
goto hairDye_Pink_1
} “Peach” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Peach Blonde
goto hairDye_Pink_1
} “Rose Gold” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Rose Gold
goto hairDye_Pink_1
}“Different Colors”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Purple” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Red Purple
goto hairDye_Pink_1
} “Lavender” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Purple Lilac
goto hairDye_Pink_1
} “Plum” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Plum
goto hairDye_Pink_1
} “Dark Purple” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Purple
goto hairDye_Pink_1
}“Different Colors”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}

label hairDye_Blue_1

    NARRATOR
Blue and green hair colors.

choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Blue” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Blue
goto hairDye_Blue_1
} “Light Blue” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Cornflower Blue
goto hairDye_Blue_1
} “Aqua Blue” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Aqua Blue
goto hairDye_Blue_1
} “Dark Blue” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Blue Black
goto hairDye_Blue_1
}“Different Colors”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}
“Green” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Green
goto hairDye_Blue_1
} “Lime Green” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Yellow Green
goto hairDye_Blue_1
} “Mint” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Mint
goto hairDye_Blue_1
} “Aqua Green” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Aqua Green
goto hairDye_Blue_1
}“Different Colors”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}

label hairDye_Red_1

    NARRATOR
Red and orange hair colors.

choice
“Orange” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Orange
goto hairDye_Red_1
} “Red” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Red
goto hairDye_Red_1
} “Copper Red” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Copper Red
goto hairDye_Red_1
} “Ginger Red” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Ginger Red
goto hairDye_Red_1
}“Different Colors”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}

label hairDye_Gray_1

    NARRATOR
White, grey, and yellow hair colors.

choice
“White” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Warm White
goto hairDye_Gray_1
} “Gray” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Cool Gray
goto hairDye_Gray_1
} “Light Gray” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Aqua Gray
goto hairDye_Gray_1
} “Yellow” {
@OLIVIA changes hairColor into Yellow
goto hairDye_Gray_1
}“Different Colors”{
goto fem_haircolor_1
}“Done” {
goto female_custom_1
}

label female_1_end
@pause for 0

#readerMessage This template was created in collaboration with @dara.amarie.ep on IG!

#}

} “No, her look is amazing” {

}
NARRATOR
Would you also like to change her name?
choice
“Yes” {

Avatar - Name Input {

    NARRATOR
So, what's your name?

label first_name_input

input What’s Your First Name?|What’s Your First Name?|Done(Olivia )

if (Olivia is “”) {

    NARRATOR
You do need a name...

goto first_name_input

} else {
continue
}

#}

} “No, her name is perfect!” {

}
@OLIVIA exits left AND OLIVIA is walk_neutral_loop
@WHITNEY enters from left to screen center AND WHITNEY is walk_worried_loop
WHITNEY (talk_asif_annoyed)
I can’t belive [OLIVIA] forgot to let the reader change her clothes
WHITNEY (callout_neutral)
[OLIVIA], you forgot something
NARRATOR (OLIVIA)
What did I forget?
@WHITNEY is eyeroll_sarcastic
WHITNEY (talk_apathetic)
You forgot to stay in here and have the readers chose your outfits.
NARRATOR (OLIVIA)
Oh. Okay I will come back in

Is this good so far or should I change some things?

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