Feedback on my new story

Hi! I recently published my new story named “ReDo”. This is my first story so I need some people to give (honest) feedback on my story. I’d like to give some feedback too if you have a story.
Let me know if you want to read my story.

Link to my story:

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I have read it and I like it. Its the first LL story I have enjoyed bc I mainly read INK story’s hence why Im making a INK story. Anyways keep up the good work

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