Feedback On My Story "My Best Friend" PLEASE :D

I would REALLY appreciate feedback on my story. I have never written anything before so I would love details on what you think and why. Thank you in advance <3

Title- My Best Friend
Author- Eliza Core
Genre- Romance
Style- Ink
Episodes- 5 (on going)
Description- A story of best friends Larsen and Cameron. What happens when feelings resurface and hormones are raging? Follow them on their journey of love, life and lust.
Instagram- @elizacorewrites

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