Feedback on my story Please!


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I am working on a story with complicated coding called The End Is Nigh and I want feedback from people other than my family and myself. I will put the link to the story right here: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6627336154644480

Btw It isn’t finished so some of the choices in episode 2 won’t work yet… When it does it will update the link.