Feedback on my story: Sophisticated & Deceived

I need feedback on my story just to how well I’m doing. This isn’t my first story that I published on the Episode app, so I’m pretty much experienced with the writer’s portal and everything else. Personally, I like to get feedback from people & take their ideas into consideration. The name of my story is called Sophisticated & Deceived.
Sophisticated & Deceived Link

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