Hello! I really want to improve my writing and coding skills, so if anyone could read my story and give me some more feedback that would be great! You don’t have to read all 3 episodes, you can even just read the first one if you want.
I’ve gotten a little bit of feedback on other review threads. 
I promise I’m not just looking for reads, I just want some feedback.
Story Title: Magicka: Rain
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5702444050087936 (I know that some links aren’t working, so you might have to search it up.)
