Feedback on pacing of my story?

Helloooo (:

So i’ve completed three episodes of my story so far and I was wondering if anyone would be interested in reviewing it for me? I am mainly worried about pacing and making sure it flows while making sense to the reader. I am totally up for R4R as well!


hey! i’d gladly read your story if you want. i love seeing new stories hehe

I’d be happy to read it.

I’ll pm both of you !

I can help if you need more😊

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