Hey hey all! I literally just jumped in to a bunch of coding without a real idea of my story’s direction, and I need some feedback. I would really, really appreciate honesty! (feel free to complete dissect and roast this )
A young woman who struggles to find work as a freelancer turns to a life of crime for money. She plans to rob a pharmacy, but things go awry and she finds herself with two bodies on her hands. She never planned to hurt anyone, and in shock, she lets herself be captured.
However, instead of being taken to prison, she wakes up in a strange room. She discovers that she was ‘recruited’ by a group of mercenaries who take people with little connections and erase their past. The world thinks she was killed trying to escape police custody; Now all she has to choose is if she wants to let herself be the perfect killer.
Well, that’s about it! This will be heavily action based, though there are other characters you can build relationships with. I have 3 endings planned based on head/heart points: You escape and go rogue, you rise in ranks and become the ‘perfect killer’, or you simply fail as an agent and they deem you no longer necessary.
As I said before, please be honest and as blunt as you want!