Feedback on Revamped Story


#1

Hello!

So, I am the author of Crossed Paths and I am so happy with its success so far!

Well, I had an old version of Crossed Paths and I would love it if someone compared the two to each other hence it being a so called experiment.

So I made a revamp as well.

I will provide the links to the old version and current version rn!

CROSSED PATHS OLD VERSION:

CROSSED PATHS NEW AND CURRENT VERSION:

Please post your thoughts below about the comparison between the two.

Thank youu!!


#2

I know the old one says discontinued and has a bunch of DO NOT ENTER stuff but feel free to read it.

Please note the first episode of the old Crossed Paths is VERY similar to the new version so please read after the first episode to get a real idea of the differences between the two.


#3

If any of you could take the time to compare the two I really would appreciate it!


#4

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