Feedback on Romance/Thriller (Guilty Pleasure Read)



Title: Love Me, CONTROL Me
Author: OhhGlam92
Episodes: 10 (Not Completed)
Genre: Romance/Thriller
Description: Your ex-love is sensing something eerie about your seductive new beau. Can you come to your senses before its too late? Or is the intensity everything you’ve ever wanted?
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If anyone can read and give me feedback, it’s greatly appreciated! I have a lot of fun writing this! It’s a fun, guilty pleasure story, so I just need some fun and laid back feedback/reviews/critiques. If you really love the story, please share it wherever you can!
The story is continuing and it’s going to gradually get more and more intense. Thrillers are right up my alley! If you like full on romance, a dash of comedy, with thrill and suspense, you’ll love this story!

Thank you so much! :grin:


Who made the photo above?


I made the cover myself. :slight_smile:


You did a good job! :blush:


Thanks! I just published my story today! Do you have a story you want me to read? Maybe we could read each other’s?


I’ll just read yours you don’t need to read one of mine :grin: They aren’t that good lol


But I might have to start tomorrow I ran out of passes :roll_eyes::joy:


I’m sure they’re great! If you change your mind, feel free to message me! And yes, please do! Tell me what you think :slight_smile:


Hey, can you please review my story? )))
Title: Fantastical: Mysterious Investigation
Author: Lаwful Evil
Genre: Fantasy
Style: limelight
Description: People are missing in Innsmoot, the monster lives in the forest. Who’s behind all this? ~


I will add to my favorites and read yours next! Please read mine and tell me what you think! Thanks! :slight_smile: