Feedback On Stories Thread {CLOSED TO CATCH UP}

Msg me a link to your story if you want feedback on it. List the following

  • Link to your story

  • Description of your story

  • What Genre

  • What Style


Lol plz give credits since I use my time to actually do and use passes for most of these

Credit me at l.3pisode on IG



Waiting List'

@Marshmallow_O (in progress)
Thx so much for being patient. I will have feedback sent to you soon :grin:


Do you do unpublished stories?

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Ya, as long as you can get it to me

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Title: Kotton Kandie
Genre: Drama
Description: Escaped from a loutish husband, Kandie tries to find a new beginning. But what she didn’t know was that her ex-husband lurks in the trails behind her.

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I’ll do this tomorrow since my phone died

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Title: The Royal Princess
Author: Mollie.stories
Description: Secrets, scandals, lies and romance. Olivia’s ordinary life is suddenly changed when it unravels that she’s Royalty. Can she rule and find her King? YOU decide! CC

Thank you x

Hello @l.3pisode, this is Sydney the moderator. Welcome to the forums. :smiley: Moved this to Share Feedback since you’re giving reviews.
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Could I have some feedback :smile:
Title: Marionette
Genre: Drama
Teaser: Life as a teenager is fun right: partying and making the most of childhood? Well not for Isabelle. She didn’t get the teenage future she was hoping for.
Cover: Marionette%20Cover

I would love to!

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense)
Title: Save Me, Hero!
Author: Turtle Cat!
Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of fugitives who are forcing her to join them. What will she do?

Feel free to check out my story.

My story: Thriller: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late?

My episodes are rather long… 20 mins about there just to give a heads up

Hey, I would love for you to check out my story and give me some feedback.:slight_smile:
Author: S_Unique

Title: The Four Horsemen

Genre: Fantasy

Style: Ink

Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter



Thanks so much for this!

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Summary: Time is running out as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
Chapters: 3 (More to come)
Style: Limelight

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

Shortened Link:

I sent you all the feedback :grin:

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Will be doing the rest on my waiting list tomorrow :slightly_smiling_face:

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I have sent you your feedback :slightly_smiling_face:

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Here is my story :slight_smile:
Story Title: Blind Date with Millionaire
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance
Author: Senada
Published : 3 Chapters
You went on a blind date with a handsome young millionaire. What will happen when you wake up in the same bed?(Romance&Drama)


Title: ReDo
Genre: Drama
Description: You get in a car accident and wake up as the most popular girl in school. Sounds perfect right? But did you forget that magic always comes with a price?

Here’s my story!

Title: To the stars & further
Author: fatima
Genre: romance

Story description: You are sexy, rich, smart and desired by every single man. Mark, the only one who will love you unconditionally. But how strong his love will be in front of your past?

Link of story:
Instagram: @fatima.episode1

Story Name: Blossoming From Zero
Written By: Lavender
Category: Drama
Episodes: 4 (more coming soon)
Short Description: Lexa, a 16 year old dealing with a lot of stuff. Her parents don’t have the best relationship, and when her mother dies, she moves in with her dad.
Long Description: Evanna, a 16 year old girl is dealing with a lot of stuff. Her parents don’t have the best relationship, and when her mother dies, she moves in with her dad. Evanna finds out that she has a new addition to her new family. Ethan, Brandon, Alex, doesn’t want her here. She wanted a happy life, but with being abused and bullied by her own family and friends, she falls into depression.

Here is the link to Blossoming From Zero if you would like to check it out! <3


Thank you! :slight_smile:

    One Day
    Best friends since the day they were born and when it comes to love, it’s always been everyone but each other. They couldn’t possibly be meant to be, could they?
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