Feedback Please!

I really need help with reviewing my story. It’s not posted so you don’t need any tickets to read. I just need feedback so I know where to go from here. I’ve asked a few people but I haven’t gotten a response. If any one can help I would greatly appreciate it!

Story Details

Romance/ Drama, Therapeutic
-Siela used to be the jolliest person anyone had known, but once something happens to her mother, her world goes grey. She is tied to her secrets and crimes without anyone to turn to. Everyone notices the life drained from Siela’s eyes, so they suggest Therapy. Little does Siela know her Therapist, Oliver, only sees red. He knows counting down from three won’t hold his temper for much longer. What happens when Oliver falls for his patient? What does Siela have to hide? Follow Siela as she navigates through a world of lies, murder, secrets, and love. LL

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I can review it just not today, is saturday good with you?

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Yes please! Whenever you can! Spring break is good for me too.

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Just send screenshots that you read my story in a pm. I should be doing r4r this weekend.

I usually read chapter for chapter. I currently have 4 chapters.

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Great, you’ll have your feed back by Saturday. Just pm me the link

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whats your story name?

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I already compromise to read other stories :(( but I will reply to this thread to bump it! I hope someone helps you

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I will read it today!

im gonna read this in a few minutes!

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