Feedback Please


#1

Hii guys! I want some feedback on my story “The Hated Twin”, It would mean a lot to me if you could try reading the first chapter and then message me some feedback on how I can improve the story.


#2

I have not read it yet but right off the bat, I think that a catchier title would catch a potential reader’s eye more then The Hated Twin. Because of the T in hated and twin it could be better.


#3

And another thing, if it’s a private school, why aren’t people wearing uniforms? Other then that, the story is really good!


#4

sure!


#5

I’ve only gone to private schools, I’ve never worn a uniform before!


#6