Feedback / Proofreaders for my first two episodes? ;']

Hi! I’ve just finished episode two of Earth From Here and would like a couple of testers/proofreaders.

STORY: EARTH FROM HERE
THEME: ACTION
COVER:

DESCRIPTION: Oriana’s life takes a turn when the authorities start looking for her. How long can she hide on a spaceship? (M LI) (Choices Matter) (Limited CC)

There’s only a male LI for now :frowning: sowwy.

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Hey! Your story sounds so cool and I’d be happy to proofread it for you for a fee (I charge £1 per episode). Let me know if you have any questions or if you’re interested! :blob_hearts:

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I’ve finished episodes 1 and 2 of Earth From Here and would love some feedback?

dm for link :slight_smile:

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Hey I can proofread for you . If your interested go to this shop and tag me and fill out the forum .

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Let me know how we can work it out! Send me a dm :slight_smile:

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