Feedback/Read for Read

#1

Hey guys
I recently published something I’ve been working on for a long time.
The story is called class crush and I’d love your feedback!!

I am more than willing to return the favor. Feel free to drop your information down below but first! Please give me your feedback!!

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My story: Class Crush : Find your Love
Author: Dina Carmen
Genre: Drama
Story style: Limelight
Description: Lauren is a relationship expert who has never been in one. Lauren agrees to help Dan get his crush’s attention, while he agrees to help her find her estranged mother. Will they find what they’re looking for?

Episodes: 5 (more coming soon)
Instagram: @dcmep

----Background on each character -----
Lauren - Put together girl who is known as the relationship expert. She has never been in a relationship. She also has an estranged mother.

Dan - Lovable guy, who needs a little help in the relationship department.

Brad - The childhood friend who wants to go back to the way it was before

Myra-Sweetest best friend a girl could ask for who is also keeping a secret from you!

Jacob-He could be a bit of a jerk … But, you could always count on him.
Dennis- Your dad!
Charlie-Can you say…Loves himself.
Henry-Dan’s best friend

#2

Hi!
I’ll do a r4r. I will add it to my favorites and message you with SS and feedback once I’m finished.

Here’s my story info:

Title: The Essentia Chronicles
Author: Tldax913
Style: Ink
Genre: fantasy
Number of episodes: 11 (ongoing)
Description: When a powerful young couple steals the Kings most prized possession, it starts a chain reaction that will either destroy their world or return it to its former glory. (two possible endings)
Link: HTTP://episodeinteractive.com/s/6652498123816960

Thank you ! !
-TD
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#3

Name: The Ember Moon Pack

Description:

Being a werewolf is not easy. Especially when you have 3 hot hybrids following your every move.

Romance/Mystery/Comedy.

Customizable Characters, 5 Endings, Choices Matter

Chapters: technically 7 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight

Link:

Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:

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Want updates on this story? Here’s the update thread!

#4

Awesome! I’ll be sure to send your feedback and reviews!

#5

Awesome! I’ll be sure to send your feedback and reviews!

#6

Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first : For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy

Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736

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#7

Hi I love to do a read4read :blush: my story is called changing for bad
Description: What happens when you’ve become the monster you once feared? Is everyone you once held dear gone forever? Can you undo what you don’t feel is broken to risk losing more? Limited CC

Its not a typical bad boy story, although Im a sucker for those ![:blush:]

#8

Hey, I would love to do a read for read with you.:slight_smile:
Here’s the details to my story in case you want to check it out.

Author: S_Unique

Title: The Four Horsemen

Genre: Fantasy

Style: Ink

Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5482099054608384

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#9

Hey! I’ve just published my first story.
Purple eyes by Ava rose
Alyssa is a normal teenage girl… Or so she thought. On her 16th birthday, she receives a gift that changes her life. But will this gift be a blessing or curse? You decide!

#10

I’d love to R4R!

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5040097505705984

Instagram: jessfox.episode
Story: BLACK BETTY
Genre: Comedy/Drama
Plot: Betty is a small town girl with big dreams of becoming a rock star. Navigating stardom, relationships, fans, and parties…Will she make it or break it? CC

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#11

hi @DinaDina ~ I sent you a DM on instagram!

#12

Perfect!

#13

Hey @DinaDina

I read all five chapters of your story. I truly enjoyed it! It’s well written and the characters you have created are adorable and well developed! The storyline is original and your dialogue is perfectly written!
My only suggestion is to watch your speech I blew placement which is nothing really!
Great story and Imlook forward to episode 6

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#14

I’ll read your first chapter and let you know what I think :slight_smile:

Living a Dream Revamped - by Mystique
Fantasy / Comedy / Romance :heart_eyes:
Character Customization

Mila transforms into a Magical Being of pure beauty & power! Will she finally live the life she’s always dreamed of and fulfill her destiny, or admit defeat?

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#16

My story: SWEET PERFECTION
Author: Shweta Mehra
Genre: Romance
Story style: Ink
Description: After breaking up, Sierra moves on to a happy single life, but what happens when she falls for “THE NERD” and her ex coming back to her life. CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 4 (more coming soon)
Instagram: @shweta_episode
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5947516399779840

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#17

Hi, I am looking for a new writer to do a read for read with? Are you interested? :slight_smile:

#18

Hey. I’m up for a R4R and a Story review :grinning:

Title:Skai’s Stories

Genre:Drama

Style:Ink

Insta:Mystery.episode

Episodes: 3 (More coming soon!)

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