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Hi :slight_smile: I just finished the first three episodes of my first story so I would really appreciate any constructive criticisms. The story is called “The Only Exception” and it’s a high school romance + family drama.

Thank you so much for your help :slight_smile:

Please dm me the feedbacks: @amelia.directs

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I will read it tonight!

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Thank you :slight_smile:

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How about R4R?

Sure, 3 episodes?
I’ll send you a screenshot when I’m done :slight_smile:
I can see your story link in your profile.

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Sure, send me your story’s link

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I’m done! Your story is different from what I usually see on episode so I really like it. The brothers and Mina are so cute too :slight_smile:

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Thanks for your feedback, I will read your story as soon as I can, have a nice day :slight_smile:

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Do you have any feedback? It can be constructive :slight_smile:

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I am taken aback by the fact the MC is viewed as cold-hearted because she rejected some guys; it is her right to say no.

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She’s viewed as cold-hearted because she doesn’t care about their feelings when she rejects them and can also be quite harsh when she rejects them. But thank you for your feedback, I’ll be sure to add on it and make it more clear :slight_smile:

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