Feedback wanted (read for read)

Hi my story is called ferewick :boarding school, I published it today and it is my first episode story. It follows you the mc that just starts her new school, and then discovers an ex pupils dead body. Your choc es effect what evidence you will find, your friendships and relationships as well as if you survive or die.
Please support me by watching and giving me feedback, when you have read my first five episode send me a screenshot of you customised character and I will read your story. I would also really like some feedback from the readers specifically constructive criticism.

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