FEEDBACK WANTED - The Newland Twins

Hi guys! I haven’t finished my book yet, but I’d be grateful if you could take the time to read my story and let me know what you think so far :slight_smile:
Be it positive or negative, I welcome your views - other wise how can us small authors starting out improve on future stories hehe :slight_smile:
You’ll be playing as both Katie and Kyra, they are about to start Uni. It should be the best time of their lives, what with making new friends, romance in the air and having a break from their family. However, you will soon discover that each twin is carrying a secret which could make or break their bond.
Thanks in advance guys if you do take the time out to read my book :smiley:
Instagram is alys.key_on.episode btw if you want to follow me


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