Feedbacks needed!

I published my first episode story and I would love to hear some honest feedbacks on it!

I’m also open for a R4R!

Choices To Die For:

Limelight style.
Lots of choices.
Lots of drama.
And Love.!


It’s already on Top community horror.

But i still would love to hear some fedbacks on what i could do better.

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