Hey guys!
So I am currently looking for proofreader who will check and maybe add bit of effects into my script. If there is anyone interested, feel free to DM me.
Thank you! 
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Hey girl, I’ll help!
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Ahaha, thats awesome! What do you wanna help with?
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Anything, really!
What do you want help with?
Either proofreading (grammar correcting) my story or small coding! (im talking bout zooms, pans and placing, i struggle with it a lot)
Ok, what’s your story idea?
I will send you story description in DM!
Dm?
direct message 
Ah, sorry I’m new to forums.
No worries!
I loved it! Just a few things though.
I’d pay a little more attention to the outfits, sometimes they weren’t overlapping each other correctly, and the transitions were sometimes a bit choppy, beside that I loved it!
Thats why I need someone! It looks horrendous I know!
So, when Eileen was talking to Ada (that’s what I’m going to call her), she was facing the opposite direction. Did you mean to do that?
What did Eileen say?
It was the whole thing about Mary, and her back was to Ada
Oh I see it now… it wasnt but now that i see it it looks much more dramatic so yes i will keep it!
Ok! When you did one of the first outfits, I can’t remember which one, but the tank top was over the skirt, did you mean that to happen?
Yes, so the skirt is like underneath the top.