Finished My first episode (Any tips?)

Hey guys!! I just finished My first episode of my new story called Blood Hands… I just wanted to see if you guys could take a look into the first episode and tell me any mistakes or fixes I could do??? Thank you everyone in advance!!! :heart: :woozy_face:
Here is the link…

sure ill pm you

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Okay thanks!

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