First chapter feedback?

I wrote my first chapter and I’m looking for feedback before I continue. I can screenshot the script as I cannot copy/paste on my mobile device. I’m open to constructive criticism as well and I’m hoping to continue with more chapters as I have some ideas for them after receiving feedback on my first. Thanks!


I can give you feedback :blush:

It would be the easiest if you could pm me the link and I will read it later :smile: You can also dm me on IG @annaw.stories if you want cause I’m more active on there :white_heart:

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