First story..Feedback please :-)

I just wrote my first chapter on my first story and I could really use some feedback, ideas, or just anything that could be helpful.

Thanks, :slight_smile:

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Your link doesnโ€™t seem to work for me. :confused:

Oh no, let me see if I can fix it.

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