First Story! Feedback, please


#1

This is a thread on my new story and its concept.
It’s called ‘Home’, and it’s about a transgender high school girl in a close-minded town trying to find her own path, struggling with dysphoria and social issues. She also has to deal with less than accepting parents, rude peers, and herself. As soon as I figure out how, I plan to make every choice matter. To affect the story, its ending, and character relationships. I would like advice and feedback. Thank you!

Side-note, someone who could help me write this would be much appreciated.


#2

I think I could.

But I do have a schedule I work on. Just telling ya.


#3

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#4

Love the Idea still learning code myself but I mean if you really need me let me know and I will tell you if I can help or not