First story, first chapter... feedback please <3


#1

I’m writing my first story… first chapter…

I would love some feedback on it… both story and directing…
suggestions to what could be done different (and how) are much appreciated…

where do I find the link to share as it is not published yet…


#2

I’d gladly give you some feed back!
If you want to share the link on here, when you go to the main screen to where you can publish from, at the very bottom is a link that you can copy and paste!


#3

Maybe This link Will work

I love Life happens…! Check it out! http://bit.ly/EpisodeHere #episode


#4

Can anyone give me some feedback?


#5

I can read the first chapter of your story and give you feedback if you do the same for me :slight_smile:

My story details:
Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Chapters: 4
Style: Limelight
Genre: drama
Description: After years of searching she had finally found them. Can she get close to them?
Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose - who will she become?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5874052041146368


#6

#7

i’d love to :slight_smile:


#8

I will start reading now and then will give you feedback via PM :slight_smile:


#9

cool :slight_smile: thanx