Im Deb. First time writer. I am looking for feedback on my story. It is still being created and i haven’t decided on an ending just yet but i have a few in mind. Please give me your honest opinions. I will also do read for read.
My story is called Swim With Me and it is a romance story about a girl who wants to be an Olympic swimmer i have 6 published episodes out currently please check it out via link:
Description: Brainwashed teenager nicola has suffered from years of abuse at the hands of her mother will she be able to find a way out? Contains violence, self harm + CC choices matter tappable choices
Chapters:28 [FULLY COMPLETED]
Style: Ink
Genre: Drama
Important info :
If you would check out my story it would be great appreciated! I have worked on it for over a year now! Hopefully your love it as much As I do
There is a lot of triggers in my story, Its a dramatic, Romantic, slight bit of thriller in and a slight bit of horror in as well
One reader quoted the following after reading all chapters “Its a classical version of flowers in the attic” And another: "I don`t have much to say about your story besides is absolutely Beautiful"
Hey there!
I’d totally be willing to do a R4R and give you some feedback! I totally understand how frustrating the learning process can be when it comes to writing an Episode story!
I just released a reality TV dating show themed romance story that I think you might really enjoy reading!
If you would just private message me if you’re interested and I’ll send you my thoughts on your story
Title: Crush on the Beach
By: Lola
Genre: Romance
Description: Ever wanted to be a contestant on a dating show? Here’s your chance. Will you find love? It’s all up to you.
Style: Limelight
CC: You can customize yourself and your name!
Choices: Your choices in this story truly MATTER and when interacting with other people on the beach, you can gain or lose relationship points which determine your future relationships and situations.
Completion status: First three episodes are out but many more are on the way!
Instagram: @LolaFromEpisode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6525980905897984
Thank you for the thread!
That’s my first Limelight story! Author: SollyRa Title: I’ll call you mine Genre: Romance! Chapters: 3 (4th is coming soon!) Description: He is a professor, the other is a millionaire and you’re a student. Will they complicate your life more or not? Romance, Drama and some choices MATTER! (LL)(CC)
I’ll appreciate if you read mine!
feedback for feedback? Episode Acc: gigistorm Episode Title: The Witch Prophecy Story Genre: Fantasy Description: You just found out you are a witch, how will you handle it, together with school and lovers? Style: LL Options: CC, choices matter. Episodes: 3 (ongoing) Story Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6722799029518336
Hi! I will gladly read your story, can you check out mine?
Author: Elena Nightingale
Title: Maxima
Genre: Fantasy | Mystery
Episodes: 3, more coming soon
Style: LL, customize your own character
Choices: choices matter and determine the ending, timed choices, mini games
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4522028521029632
Story description:
I like that is is creepy and different but if you didn’t pay attention to the name in the article you can’t go back and find it so I can’t keep reading now.
I think i have done all the R4R above. Please let me know if you still want to do R4R or if i have missed your story. I am still waiting on feedback from a few people.