*** First Story - Looking for feedback ***

Title : Hannah Miler’s Mystery
Author: Remone
Story genre :Mystery
Story style :lime light
Description: Hannah Miler was brutally killed in the woods.Will Ser be able to solve the mystery of Hannah miler’s death and will able to find the killer ?.And how is Ser related to Hannah.(CC)
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6311583539331072
IG: remonevov6.0

PLS checkout my story.

Hi all,

The next two on my R4R list are:


Still waiting on screenshots from below:



A love story?