First Story Review - I will review yours in return :)

Hi everyone, I’m Ellie!

I just released the first three chapters of my first story called One Day.
I would love and appreciate some feedback and will happily review your story in return :slight_smile:

Title: One Day
Author: Ellie

Best friends since the day they were born and when it comes to love, it’s always been everyone but each other. They couldn’t possibly be meant to be, could they?

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Instagram: elliewrites.episode

Thank you lovelies!

xo Ellie


Read for read?
Story name: MC: The Golden Line
Author: Shana Ravi
Genre: Romance, Fantasy and Murder

Absolutely !!

Hi there! I’ll gladly review your story! Could you review mine as well?

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Summary: Time is running out as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
Chapters: 3 (More to come)
Style: Limelight

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

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Just finished your first episode.

I would love r4r :slight_smile:
Story Title: Blind Date with Millionaire
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance
Author: Senada
Published : 3 Chapters
You went on a blind date with a handsome young millionaire. What will happen when you wake up in the same bed?(Romance&Drama)


Hey! I can do a review! Please give me some tips for my story!

Will do!!

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Sounds good. thank you! :slight_smile:

I’ll read it! :slight_smile:

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Thank you, I will read yours too :slight_smile:

Reading your chapter now! I’d love to know your thoughts on mine.

Alright I will start reading when I get home. Trust me I do honest reviews.

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My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Story style: Secret Surprise :wink:
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6

My episodes are rather LONGGGG… 20 mins about there just to give a heads up.

review for review?

Story: Blades of Desire

Author: Giselle C.

Genre: Mystery/Horror/Drama/Romance

Description: You thought going from rich to poor is the worst thing that could happen to you. Think again… a hot murderer is in town and he’s looking for you.

Features: Advanced directing, non-cliche plot line, choices matter, FULL character customization, unique and big closet, POC and LGBTQ characters, LGBTQ option, mini games.

Episodes: 3, 4 coming soon.





I have read many of your stories :slight_smile: Once I receive a review from you, I will post yours in return!

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