First time writer, hopefully you like it


#1

I’m writing Is it true love?. Check it out: https://episode.app.link/og1c66NOPN


#2

I think u should improve your directing. And I think the point of the story is ight


#3

How should I improve my directing


#4

The characters almost never move their mouths when their speaking, they speak in slang always, Kiki and the main character walk differently directions when they’re supposed to Be going the same way.


#5