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I would like some help with things you think i should change like a picture and a text example of what should be there instead…

And for the hardin part. He’s a bad boy Yes. But i will come to that part later in the story. First i want them to get to know more about the main character which is tessa. And later on i am planning on write a lot of Flashbacks. I will let them know Everyone. Chapter 5 will be a lot about that. I think the most important thing is to know the main character before you get to know the others. I will have chapter 5 about isac and so on. I have a lot of plans for this story. If you know what i mean…

Title: Sophisticated & Deceived
Author: Briana M.
Genre: Romance
Chapters Published: 21 ~ongoing~
Detailed Summary: There’s one thing to not have a man in your life, but it’s another thing to be a feminist. Ashden, a 26 year old female, will learn the importance of having a man in her life. She doesn’t think she’s capable of falling in love…for now.


hi there! just wondering if you were still doing reviews?

Title: Rich Girls Cry Too
Author: Ava Josefine
Genre: Drama
Plot/Summary: Vera’s dream of becoming a famous musician feels closer than ever when a new, big TV-show about her school is being made. But things don’t turn out the way she expects them to.
Style: Limelight

Hope you feel like checking it out!

Hey just revamped the story hope you’ll read and enjoy it more!! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Hey, I would like it if you could read and give feedback of my other story.
My life as Sofia lancaster

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