I love how this thread trying to help people with custom poses got ruined by someone who keep making unnecessary posts, please get over it and act mature. This isn’t a thread to whine nor fight about constructive criticism that was given that was meant to help the artist improve. I understand this post will get flagged but it’s worth it if this “argument” won’t continue. Thanks, good day. 
And yes, I do agree with Tami and MG but with improvements, your poses will look even better. Just keep practicing! 