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#1

Hi! :slight_smile:

I’m a regular Episode Reader, Writer & Director.
I’ve published one story - Living a Dream (Fantasy, Romance)
As a writer, I know how difficult it can be to learn how to code and on top of everything come up with a good storyline and interesting characters, which is why I’d gladly offer some advice.

It took me months before I released my 1st 3 chapters as I wanted to make sure that I made it close to perfect! Although realistically speaking, a story can never be perfect, there will always be improvements that can be made, but don’t let that stop you from writing!

If you want to improve your story, or get some honest advice, I would be happy to read your 1st chapter. Take note that your 1st chapter is the most important chapter of your entire story! If it lacks quality and effort people won’t bother reading the chapters that follow, even if they are amazing!

Feel free to send me your story, I’ll see if I can help.
If you want to, you can follow me on

INSTAGRAM: @episode.mystique
FACEBOOK: @episode.mystique
EPISODE USERNAME: (MYSTIQUE)

MY story:

Fantasy / Romance
Limelight
Living A Dream - by Mystique

21-year-old Mila suffers from a broken heart and in turn, lost all her confidence. Now she’s making a miraculous recovery as she transforms into a magical being of astounding beauty & power. Will she finally live the life she’s always dreamed of? *Character Customization Available


#2

Would you be able to review my story?

I have only posted 3 chapters so far because I only just published my story last night.
You might think the first chapter is quite short but it’s because I didn’t want to give too much away in the first 3 chapters.

Title: Nocturnal
Author: CrazyCreativeMind
Episodes: 3 (More episodes coming soon)
Genre: Horror/Drama
Style: Limelight
Description: It’s been a year since Eli’s sister was taken by soul-devouring demons. Now, they have come back for him and won’t stop until his sanity is lost and his soul is captured.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4775419765456896


#3

Hi, my name is Dani!
Here’s my story:
Title: Darkness
Author: Dani
Style: Ink
Description: If you can’t get away from darkness, you learn to live with it… A vampire story with action, adventure, mystery and, of course, romance!
This is not a cliche vampire story!
Episodes: 11 (more to come)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5439290271858688
Instagram: daniepisodewriter

I hope you like it :black_heart:


#4

Hey, this is nice of you to do! I’d love if you could give our story a review :blush:

Title - Beautiful Broken Lies
Author - Hannah & Carly
Genre - mystery (also a comedy, drama & romance)
Instagram - harly_episode
Description - Elena’s life seems perfect. Partying, boys, friends, you name it. That is until a dark tragedy changes her life forever. What is the truth? Will it break her?
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6662026650320896

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Thanks so much :kissing_heart:


#5

Hi. Would you like to read my story?
Title: A Divine Tale
Author: Emily Mason
Genre: Fantasy/Adventure
Style: Ink
Description: Individuals with supernatural power are called “divinus.” They are forced to live in a world that hates them. Someone has decided to kill every last one of them. Including you.Supernatural_d0_posterThumb_Qe44ZSFQLC
Link: I’m reading A Divine Tale. Check it out: https://episode.app.link/UnVm5Hpd0N


#6

Hi,

Thank you for starting this thread! I would love a review. I’m always looking for ways to improve my story and I look forward to your feedback.

Title: The Essentia Chronicles
Author: Tldax913
Episodes: 10 (ongoing)
Style: INK
Genre: fantasy
Description: Kadence is a powerful essence with a troubled past. Will she be able to embrace her power in time to save her realm or will darkness consume her?
Link: HTTP://episodeinteractive.com/s/6652498123816960
Thank you :slightly_smiling_face:
-TD
Side Note: My first episode is very long and probably should have been cut halfway through and continued as chapter 2.
I’m already almost finished typing chapter 11 and before I publish it, I would like to know if it would benefit the story if I shorten chapter one and move the other chapters down.

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#7

Hi! It would be so kind of you if u could check out my story!

Here’s the link:

The story is called Trapped and 5 episodes are currently published. It would be so helpful if you could review it or just take the time to read it in general! Thanks!


#8

Hi! I just recently came back from a long hiatus and I just updated my most popular story. I edited the entire story, changed the backgrounds up, and added some character customization for love interests! I hope you enjoy. :heart:

Title: The Secret of Sherman High
Author: Margaret A. Knox
Episodes: 10 (More episodes coming soon)
Genre: Mystery (with some romance and drama)
Style: INK
Description: Betrayal, secrecy, romance, and scandal await you in the halls of Sherman High…
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5135463616872448

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#9

Would like to do one too!

I have 2 stories

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A murder mystery!


#10


Typical episode drama!


#11

OMG!
Sounds so good would love to do a read for read!

Are you up for It?


#12

I would be so appreciative if you gave me some advice on my story!
Story: Both of Us
Author: Zoe King
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Episodes: 14 (ongoing)
Description: Marie thought it was just a trip to Greece… until she was kidnapped by a gang! How will she unearth dangerous secrets and stay alive? You decide!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6732271222784000
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#13

Hello, I’m a new writer and I would like a review please. :light_smile:

This is my story.

Story title: Rewinded life.

Author name: Lia Lopez.

Description:
What would you do if a galactic being gives you the power to go back and change situations that escapes from your hands?

Genre: Comedy, romance, life.

Episodes: 5 (Working on chapter 6.)(Ongoing.)

Link:

Cover: Pending review.


#14

Hey, I would like if you could read my story :blush:
Name: You,Me And The Beat
Author: Anna


#15

Heyy, would you be able to review my story?

Story name: Plan B
Author: Madalynn
Chapters: 4
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Description: You have a past with prison break planning but now you’ve left that life behind. Until you meet a cocky but charming Braiden Duane, who asks your help. Will you be able to say no?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5679276948062208
Instagram: madalynn.episode
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#16

Name- Retaliation
Author- Saka Moshood Abiodun
Genre- Thriller, Political drama, Revenge, Revenge play, drama, heavy drama, suspense
Summary- Rose’s simple life was destroyed by a political family. In a thirst of revenge, she takes the identity of a successful business woman named Kim Brown. Now Rose plans on flipping the tables on those who destroyed her.
One quote from Rose- “I will strip them of everything they love, money, love life, family. Everything I lost”
Style- Ink
Published- Yes
Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5630965940879360 6
Episodes- 12

(more to come)
The story is well explained!
I am not narrating what happened to Rose! It is well scripted and directed!
Please check it out and leave a message.
Xoxo


#17

sure! DM me


#18

I hope my review was helpful :slight_smile:
Have a nice day


#19

Hi thank you for your requests, I will do the reviews one by one starting from the top. :slight_smile:

Just give me a little time to get to everything.


#20

K i’ll reach out when I get time!:grin: