Heyyy, I will provide honest reviews for those that want to improve their story through critical (but helpful) pointers.
Remember these are just my opinions, you may not think the same as me and that’s okay
Just comment with a link to your story (if not already published) or the name of your story and the author’s name.
Please don’t personal message me, as I am likely to forget and it just keeps it organised keeping everything in the comments of the post.
For clarification, please don’t ask for a review if you just want me to read your story.
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Why I review stories (and why you should get your story reviewed):
I’ve attempted to write stories and know how hard it is, sometimes the perspective of a reader is quite helpful.
Sometimes when you are constantly working on a story, you can become numb to emotions, text and the general flow of the story. Therefore it’s hard to pick out where improvement is needed.
I want to help people properly demonstrate their ideas in a way that’s interesting for readers, so their story can become more popular.
I’m pretty bored and miss episode a lil
I will be reviewing 3 episodes which is a guarantee. However, if you’re story is intriguing, I will be happy to review more episodes (if there are more than 3).
A fresh set of eyes is always helpful
At the moment a review is guaranteed within a day after I comment on your comment - I’ll start reviewing.
In review process (up to 3 chapters):
-Connected by fate.
-The tale of alynthia
-Life in demby
Hey, thank you so much for this post. I would be glad to recieve an honest review from you .
Title : Life in Demby (revamped)
Author : Megz_episode
Description : Group of new students arrive in the university of Demby to start their new life. What will happen when the mysterious Author try to draw them into his sick, twisted GAME?
Genre : Mystery
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5406229651980288
This is my story and now I will follow you on instagram.
I will start reviewing
How would you like to receive the review? I can PM on instagram or the forums or I can post it publicly in the comments of ur comment - sorry that was a mouth full lmao.
You can DM me on instagram
Hello! Thanks for the thread. I’d love a review for my DD contest entry.
I don’t mind where you post the review. I will also follow you on IG.
This is my link:
Hey! bookmarking~ I will come back to u soon.
Thank you for this thread! I’d love to have a review!
Here’s my Story:
Title: The Tale of Alynthia
Genre: Adventure(with Comic Elements)
Chapters: 13 (Ongoing)
My IG: @mukta.writes
Link to the Story:
Followed you on IG!
I’ll start reviewing How would you like to receive the review?
Thank you so much for your thread! I would love if you wanted to read and review my story ICARUS! You can be as honest (and brutal) as you want to!
Here’s the story description as well as the link!
ＩＣＡＲＵＳ by Archangel
A Thriller|Mystery|Sci-Fi - story
A cunning detective and an evasive criminal cross paths and together they realize that flying too close to the sun might be their greatest downfall.
What is the general plot of ICARUS?
- Two MC:s
- Mature themes
- Impactful and meaningful choices
- Multiple endings
- Important side-characters
⇨ LINK TO READ ICARUS ⇦
Name of episode: Identical Souls
Author’s name: Tumbi
Description: Headstrong twins enter a cruel, unjust world where their lives are constantly at risk because of their identity. Within this lies a twisted web of dishonesty, secrets and betrayal.
Extra info: please only read the first episode as I haven’t finished the second or third and when you read it, I know is offers different genders for both MC and LI but I haven’t finished creating the other pathways so you will only get to read the female MC and male LI. If this is too confusing I don’t mind if you don’t want to read this episode but thank you if you do.
I’ll start reviewing How would you like to receive your review? Remember to follow my instagram
Thanks for the post, here’s my story!
Title : Mafia’s Obsession
Author : chordwrites
Description : Life’s a mess. There’s no hope for you. Or so you thought. Can a mysterious mafia boss change everything you ever thought possible? What happens when love turns into obsession? ━CC
Genre : Thriller
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6251040479838208
I followed you on insta!
Dang I saved this in the morning because I wanted to request, I can see I am not the only one.
You a bit of a list to get through, but I be happy if I can come it to with my unrelease story
Haha yes, if you request a review in a few days or so, I should be able to do it by then
Look, mate, I honest to god can’t find anything to critique. Iike the fact you have a male main character. Also think the directing is amazing, you have clearly put a lot of work into perfecting it so that everything is smooth and clean. Also love the whole idea of not warning people about choices because it represents real life and it’s something I’ve been doing whilst writing my story. Your idea is so original and makes sense.
Hope you get all the recognition you deserve writers should aspire to write like you.
Thank you so much for your kind words! I’ve been working on it for over a year, so it makes me really happy to hear that you liked it! I’ve been very hesitant to release it (because I’m a perfectionist and wanted to finish 2/3 of it before releasing), so it makes me truly happy that someone likes it! Thank you yet again!