Free reviews and minor ideas for your stories

Hey, I’m an absolute no one that has too much time and has done too much research on writing and good storytelling. If you want an honest opinion about your story or maybe you’re stuck and need an idea I’m here for you. I’ll only read your first chapter but if you really want me to I might continue on


I will really appreciate a review and idea about anything I need to change or add for making my story better

Title: Shado
Author: Roy
Description: After tragedy, Roy returns to civilization a changed women. She begins her crusade, determined to put things right, with the help of her trusted people,waging a one-woman on crime.
Genre : Action
Style: Ink
Chapters: 9 and ongoing


Here’s mine hope you can check it out!

The link doesn’t work. I’ve tried it a few times but nothing works. Could you try sending it again?

I’ve read the first chapter. Do you want me to PM you my thoughts or post it here?

PM would be great thanks!

Hi! I would really appreciate if you could give feedback about my story sometime :slight_smile:

Hey! We’d love for you to read and review our story!

This is @eliseclairmont and I first story so it would mean a lot to us if you’d be willing to check it out as well as review it!

Story Link:
Description: Follow Detective Hudson who has spent their life trying to put their family’s tragic history behind them until a new serial killer threatens to uncover the past. M/F MC, 4 LI, CM
Author: Elle
Genre: Mystery
CC: Limited
Choices matter and there are multiple points systems!

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Here it is…

Let me know if it worked.
You can search in Episode with the story name or my username or the first line of the description otherwise.

Story Title: The Flame Between Us
Author: Brianna Cavazos
Style: LL
Chapters: 5
Status: ongoing
Description: After being sent to Military School for 3 long years, Ellen begins her senior year at her old school, Maxwell High. What could go wrong when she is face to face with reality?
Please give me harsh feedback! I’m currently trying to revamp my story to be more appealing.

Thank you for the opportunity, Evie!
This is the thread to my story!

Hey hun i would love a review from you! Here are my story deets!

Story Name : Necromancers (LL)
Chapters Available: 4
Extra Facts: Two MCs (male and female), two LI (male), Point system, choices matter, art scenes
Eve and Zeke are the last Necromancers. Demons ravel. Truths to be told. One big mistake can change everything in a few seconds. Remember it’s just the beginning of the end…
Choices: Yes a few matters to determine the relationship with LI and mini fights.
CC: Limited
Instagram: @epi.enchantress

Thanks for this :blush:
My insta is @Ice.episode_
I’d like a review but can I come to you if I’m stuck in anything too ?

Story Title:
The Secret Agent
Chapters (also whether it’s ongoing or complete):
4 ongoing
When two new suspicious guys enter college, will getting close to them cause you to uncover secrets you thought you never would (Ll & CC)

Link :

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: The Secret Agent

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