I really liked your story! It’s like Inside Out but with a twist!
The characters were very thought out and I good definitely see each one of the emotions personality.
Many grammatical errors but there are no missing punctuation.
Directing was amazing! The zooms were placed at the right time. Maybe take out a few, some seemed unnecessary but I liked them. I am even thinking about putting more into my own story now! Some of the pauses, such as when you are picking out an outfit in the first episode, seem too long. Maybe shorten them a bit? If you want your characters to be closer together or in a different spot, remember to use spot directing!
Coding was really good! The animations match with the dialogue. The bar game added a nice touch! There are a few speech bubbles that go with the wrong character. Maybe add a few more choices as well?
Overall I really liked the idea of this story! It’s really unique!