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#1

Hey! I’m always looking for new stories to read!
For new authors, I always find that it’s helpful to have your stories reviewed as it provides insight to your story, and how you can improve it. The score will be in a percentage . Y’all need to know I’ll be reading the first 3-5 chapters ONLY!
Please do not be offended by my review! I know nobody’s story is perfect, especially at the beginning,and do bare with me as it might take time for me to give you your feedback … I will also try to focus on the negative rather than the positive! I can reject any story I wantI’m still writing my story and wether you believe it or not I do have a life out of episode … shocking ik
If you gained from my feedback make sure to like :heart:

THIS IS HOW I WILL BE GRADING IT:

Grammar/Spelling: 1,2,3,4,5

Directing: 1,2,3,4,5

Plot: 1,2,3,4,5

Length: 1,2,3,4,5

Cover: 1,2,3,4,5

Script: 1,2,3,4,5

ADDITIONAL NOTES:

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#2

Title: Perfect You
Author: KM
Episodes: 5 (ongoing)
Description: Lily is trying to forget her past, what happen when she meet Derek? Drama and love enters, and everything goes upside down! Media is after her, can Lily take it? CC |Artscenes|


#3

https://www.instagram.com/p/Bi9HjvpFhzS/ If he only knew by sapphire li, 8 episodes so far, currently working on 9 :slight_smile:


#4

Hey! Thank you so much for creating this thread :blush: Here’s my story

Title: Mad Love
Genre: Romance/Mystery
Author: Akanksha S.
Style: Ink
Episodes: 9 (ongoing)
Description: One day, you wake up and your mom is gone. Will you be able to find her in time and also true love along the way?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4736906335879168

Thanks :heart:


#5

Title: A Juggling Game
Author: KandieCane
Number of Episodes: 14
Additional notes:
Kara is a full-time student, intern for a top stylist iun the world, and maintains relationships. Is she able to keep up?


#6

@KandieCane
@KM90
I need your guys link, I have a limited passes and it would be difficult for me to read your story …

If your working on a chapter do inform me so I wouldn’t read it


#7

#8

Ofc, wierd that It weren’t there but here you go:
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5019180572475392


#10

Hey, I’d love a review!

Title: Reformed
Author: Cordelia M
Number of episodes: 7

Thank you! :yellow_heart:


#12

The link is here: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4696324662099968

Sorry, I put it in the title, didn’t know if you’d see it Xx


#13

Hi! I’d love it if you’d review my story! I don’t care about the harsh feedback, in fact, I’d love it!
Title: Shape Shifting Madness
Author: Dasha
Episodes: 14
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6006937021972480


#14

Title: Fantastical: Into Another World
Author: OB
Number of Episodes: 3
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4541761362198528
Additional notes: I want to thank you for reviewing my story :slight_smile:


#15

Hi! :slight_smile: I’d like a review please :heart:

Here are my story details,

Title: A Husband’s Regret
Author: Sally Denno
Episodes: 6 and ongoing (weekly update) (also I am updating today)
Description: Wesley Sutherland suffers after losing his pregnant fiance, causing him to behave irresponsibly. What happens when his Grandpa forces him to get married?
Genre: romance/drama
Style: Ink
Instagram: @sally.writes96
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4681868246777856

Cover:

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I hope you like it, Thank you :smile:


#16

Story name: Under Construction

Author name: Nika Tyler

Number of episode: 3 and ongoing

Style: INK

instagram: episodeofnika

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5265835262607360

Thank you very much! :blush:


#17

Why not.

Title: Agents Of SPECTRUM
Genre: Adventure
Author: Andrew (Drew) Jones
Chapters: 6 published with more on the way.
Description: A young lady is recruited by a government agency, and her life is changed forever.
Instagram: andrewjones.episodes
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5075535578005504


#18

Grammar/Spelling: 1,2,3,4,5

Directing: 1,2,3,4,5

Plot: 1,2,3,4,5

Length: 1,2,3,4,5

Cover: 1,2,3,4,5

Script: 1,2,3,4,5

Percentage: 70%

ADDITIONAL NOTES: Your story is amazing good plot but poor grammar (Many people on the episode forum are able to help) Your script is a bit to common tbh.


#19

I need the link


#20

Grammar/Spelling: 1,2,3,4,5

Directing: 1,2,3,4,5

Plot: 1,2,3,4,5

Length: 1,2,3,4,5

Cover: 1,2,3,4,5

Script: 1,2,3,4,5

Percentage:73%
ADDITIONAL NOTES: Your story is a tad unrealistic, drags on too long , you need to work on keeping the reader hooked other than that good job! :clap:


#21

Grammar/Spelling: 1,2,3,4,5

Directing: 1,2,3,4,5

Plot: 1,2,3,4,5

Length: 1,2,3,4,5

Cover: 1,2,3,4,5

Script: 1,2,3,4,5

Percentage:60%

ADDITIONAL NOTES: You should NOT be introducing the characters you should let the reader get to know them (If you still want to describe them the way you did On chapter 1 than it shouldn’t be the same thing from you bio abt the story) some of your animations aren’t matching on chapter 3


#22

Grammar/Spelling: 1,2,3,4,5

Directing: 1,2,3,4,5

Plot: 1,2,3,4,5

Length: 1,2,3,4,5

Cover: 1,2,3,4,5

Script: 1,2,3,4,5

Percentage: 60%

ADDITIONAL NOTES: Do not describe people!!!
Make more thoughts :thought_balloon:No flashbacks it would be better to describe … The length is either to long or too short