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Title: When Time Stopped
Genre: Drama
Author: Natalie Jade
Chapters: 5
Description: Follow three characters through the nuclear apocalypse. How will you survive in a world of terror and violence?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6665862366625792
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Title: Revenge Is Best Served With…
Author: shantastic1999
Number of episodes: 3
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6222599858946048

Title: Human?
Author: shantastic1999
Number of episodes: 12
Link:

Title: Just For Him [EPISODES 1 & 2 ONLY]
Author: shantastic1999
Number of episodes: 2 ready, more will come soon
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6207444664188928

Thank you for the feedback! And yeah, it does drag on for a bit long. Just the introduction of all the characters and everything took forever lol. I’ll make sure to fix those errors :blush:

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Hello! I would like a review! Its my first story on Episode :blush:

Thanks :heart:

Story title : Sandy and her Quadruplets
Author : R.J.
Genre : Comedy
Style : Ink
Completed : No (I wrote 8 episodes) :slightly_smiling_face:
Customization : No but it stills fun to read!
Description : How can she survive with noisy and disobedient quadruplets? Will she finally find the father of her sons ? Here’s the crazy life of Sandy and her quadruplets!
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5337323130716160

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I would love if you could check out my story.:slight_smile:
Here’s the details to my story.
Author: SS
Title: Shattered Souls
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5150158950367232

I’m glad it helped! Sorry if it was harsh

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Hey there, @Ms.Mystery!

Thank you for reviewing our stories. Could you review mine?

Title: Your Secret Admirer
Author: EpisodeCray
Number of Episodes: 3
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4654341800198144
Additional Notes: Is it okay if you private message me the review instead?

Thank you for your time and I hope you’ll enjoy my story!

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On no, it was great! I was gonna try and fix that slow paced part anyway but thanks for pointing it out :blush:

Grammar/Spelling: 1,2,3,4,5

Directing: 1,2,3,4,5

Plot: 1,2,3,4,5

Length: 1,2,3,4,5

Cover: 1,2,3,4,5

Script: 1,2,3,4,5

Percentage: 67%

ADDITIONAL NOTES: You need to work on the animations …

Hey there! I’m up for an honest review on my story.

Just like episodecray, maybe it’d be better if you’d send your review through PM too…

Title: Everything You Are
Author: Julia E
Episodes: 3
Style : INK
Genre: Romance (with a mix of Comedy and Drama)
Summary: In a world full of overused high school romance plots, the story of a girl falling for someone she knew would never feel the same way she does fights her way to prove it’s possible

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5835142413549568

Title: Struggles of Life
Author: Sakshi
Number of Episodes: 15
Genre: Drama
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5913318221676544
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That’s really nice of you! Hope you enjoy reviewing my story:

Title: Over Before You Know It
Author: Lizard
Description: You and your best friend make a suicide pact to go to the Grand Canyon and end it all together. Will you both really do it? Or will it be over before you know it?
Number of Episodes: 7
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6584190301765632

Hi, @Ms.Mystery!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush: Episode advocates recommended! (which has made me insanely happy. Go check their account for awesome recommendations if you haven’t yet!)

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af

Amazing I’m a beginner so I would love a review

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy
Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 4 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736 1

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Hello Alex,
I’ve read your story and I really like it ! It’s amazing because I love the choices and the plot it’s totally interesting.
Continue like that ! Your story deserves thousands and thousands of reads ! :smiley:

Best,

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Grammar/Spelling: 1,2,3,4,5

Directing: 1,2,3,4,5

Plot: 1,2,3,4,5

Length: 1,2,3,4,5

Cover: 1,2,3,4,5

Script: 1,2,3,4,5

Percentage: 73%

ADDITIONAL NOTES: You need to work on helping the reader feel what he’s feeling …, your dad forcing you to marry again < how does it make the reader feel … Show things from his dads point of view …why he did it , MAKE ME FEEL SAD ABOUT HIS WIFES DEATH!!! Show som convos between them !!

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Grammar/Spelling: 1,2,3,4,5

Directing: 1,2,3,4,5

Plot: 1,2,3,4,5

Length: 1,2,3,4,5

Cover: 1,2,3,4,5

Script: 1,2,3,4,5

Percentage: 57%

ADDITIONAL NOTES: I suggest you try another cover, when I read your story it was completely different than what the cover implied , and pls go recheck some words, you use words with different meaning in a sentences which honestly kinda made me giggle , it was cute also your plot is too long

Grammar/Spelling: 1,2,3,4,5

Directing: 1,2,3,4,5

Plot: 1,2,3,4,5

Length: 1,2,3,4,5

Cover: 1,2,3,4,5

Script: 1,2,3,4,5

Percentage: 50%

ADDITIONAL NOTES: Your dialogue needs more work